From cc8370490738411c7a33fc0f0c2a318e8b5da897 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Konrad Scorciapino <konrad@scorciapino.com>
Date: Wed, 23 Mar 2011 16:27:50 -0300
Subject: [PATCH] better phrasing

---
 emacstips.mdwn | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/emacstips.mdwn b/emacstips.mdwn
index 0fcb1c8..db16550 100644
--- a/emacstips.mdwn
+++ b/emacstips.mdwn
@@ -189,11 +189,11 @@ Among the available browsers, w3m seems to do a better job converting
 the html, and if you have the w3m emacs package, you can use it,
 instead of the w3m-standalone, and thus preserve the text formatting.
 
-But if the rendering fails for one reason or another, (or is perhaps
-inadequate if you really need to see the graphical presentation of the
-HTML message), it can be useful to display the message in an external
-viewer, such as a web browser. Here's a little script that Keith
-Packard wrote, which he calls `view-html`:
+But if the rendering fails for one reason or another, or if you really
+need to see the graphical presentation of the HTML message, it can be
+useful to display the message in an external viewer, such as a web
+browser. Here's a little script that Keith Packard wrote, which he
+calls `view-html`:
 
 		#!/bin/sh
 		dir=`mktemp -d`
-- 
2.45.2