X-Git-Url: https://git.cworth.org/git?p=cworth.org;a=blobdiff_plain;f=src%2Fexa%2Fi965%2Flca_2008.mdwn;h=0df01337a460766f3e0ae3bab3aed1e79b311b4a;hp=97d3ac10ed30d03fb690941fa827760c1df3fe3f;hb=8afa5be7506cb9be28de06d5d865f71008428e95;hpb=2a78e00b476eb7483eb3a4a6fc479e8b843a2924

diff --git a/src/exa/i965/lca_2008.mdwn b/src/exa/i965/lca_2008.mdwn
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--- a/src/exa/i965/lca_2008.mdwn
+++ b/src/exa/i965/lca_2008.mdwn
@@ -11,19 +11,19 @@ of the work that's going on within the X.org development community.
 Part of my reply to Benjamin was that there were a lot of excellent
 talks given at LCA this year, (Keith Packard, Dave Airlie, Adam
 Jackson, Jesse Barnes, Peter Hutterer, Eric Anholt, and myself were
-all there talking about X in one for or another). And that is true,
+all there talking about X in one way or another). And that is true,
 but it's also true that many people were not able to attend LCA to
 hear those talks. And while the LCA conference kindly posts [video of
 the talks](http://linux.conf.au/programme/presentations) that's not
 always the most desirable way of getting information when not at the
 conference in person.
 
-So I think it would be fair to see that we've been doing a poor job of
+So I think it would be fair to say that we've been doing a poor job of
 providing easy-to-find information about what's going on with X. I
 definitely want to help improve that, and I even just got an official
 designation to do exactly that. I was recently elected to the X.org
 Board of Directors and also assigned to chair a Communications
-committed whose job it is to help X.org communicate more
+committee whose job it is to help X.org communicate more
 effectively. What can we do better? Please email me with your
 ideas.