From: Carl Worth <cworth@cworth.org>
Date: Fri, 28 Sep 2007 08:24:03 +0000 (-0700)
Subject: Clarify the wording of one sentence.
X-Git-Url: https://git.cworth.org/git?p=hgbook-git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=8d85c42f151c3ec5eaf91aebf3798bf6edb167ca

Clarify the wording of one sentence.
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diff --git a/tour.mdwn b/tour.mdwn
index 3ba6af9..9b50042 100644
--- a/tour.mdwn
+++ b/tour.mdwn
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@ A tour of git: the basics
 
 ### 2.0 Copyright
 
-This document is a modified version originally known as "Distributed
-revision control with Mercurial" and originally authored by Bryan
-O’Sullivan. The original document was obtained from
+This document is a modified version of a document originally titled
+"Distributed revision control with Mercurial" and originally authored
+by Bryan O’Sullivan. The original document was obtained from
 <http://hgbook.red-bean.com/>.
 
 Copyright © 2006, 2007 Bryan O’Sullivan.