From 8d85c42f151c3ec5eaf91aebf3798bf6edb167ca Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Carl Worth <cworth@cworth.org>
Date: Fri, 28 Sep 2007 01:24:03 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Clarify the wording of one sentence.

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 tour.mdwn | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/tour.mdwn b/tour.mdwn
index 3ba6af9..9b50042 100644
--- a/tour.mdwn
+++ b/tour.mdwn
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@ A tour of git: the basics
 
 ### 2.0 Copyright
 
-This document is a modified version originally known as "Distributed
-revision control with Mercurial" and originally authored by Bryan
-O’Sullivan. The original document was obtained from
+This document is a modified version of a document originally titled
+"Distributed revision control with Mercurial" and originally authored
+by Bryan O’Sullivan. The original document was obtained from
 <http://hgbook.red-bean.com/>.
 
 Copyright © 2006, 2007 Bryan O’Sullivan.
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