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-[[img introduction.jpg size="300x300" class="floatright"]]
-[[img cover.jpg size="300x300" class="floatright"]]
-# Anika's Traveling Turtle
+[[meta title="Anika's Traveling Turtle"]]
+[[tag family]]
+
+[[img cover.jpg size="300x300" class="right"]]
 
 Confession time.
 
@@ -17,18 +18,18 @@ Since then, we've stayed in good touch with the Willis family. While
 we were in Virginia, they were in New Jersey which was just close
 enough that we were able to spend some great Thanksgiving holidays
 together. Now, we all miss each other terribly since we're in Oregon
-while they're in north Carolina.
+while they're in North Carolina.
 
 ## The problem
-
+[[img introduction.jpg size="300x300" class="left"]]
 A couple of months ago, we received Anika's Traveling Turtle in the
-mail, (a notebook which can be seen in the photographs to the
-right). The plan was that we would write an entry about an animal and
-mail it on to someone else to do the same. We even took it with us on
-our Spring Break trip to the coast with full intentions to add an
-entry right away. But "the best-laid plans" and all that. Cameron has
-now made a nice entry on the life cycle of a frog, and Hyrum did the
-same for salmon. But we don't have time to let the turtle do any more
+mail, (look at the adorable message she wrote to introduce it). The
+plan was that we would write an entry about an animal and mail it on
+to someone else to do the same. We even took it with us on our Spring
+Break trip to the coast with full intentions to add an entry right
+away. But "the best-laid plans" and all that. Cameron has now made a
+nice entry on the life cycle of a frog, and Hyrum did the same for
+salmon. But we don't have time to let the turtle do any more
 traveling, (at least not through snail mail).
 
 ## A plea for help