Reword things since planet.gnome.org really does want to aggregate the combined blog

[cworth.org] / src / blog / technical.mdwn

diff --git a/src/blog/technical.mdwn b/src/blog/technical.mdwn
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--- a/src/blog/technical.mdwn
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@@ -1,13 +1,9 @@
 [[meta title="Carl's technical blog"]]
 
-This is the subset-of my blog that is focused on technical issues,
+This is the subset of my blog that is focused on technical issues,
 (cairo, the X Window System, or other free software). The occasional
 not-too-technical-but-perhaps-of-interest-to-the-general-geek item
-might also appear. This is the right blog for places like
-planet.gnome.org and plante.freedesktop.org to aggregate.
-
-What won't appear here are my thoughts on religion or personal items
-about members of my family. See my separate [[personal blog|personal]]
-if you're interested in those.
+might also appear. See also my separate [[personal blog|personal]] and
+[[both combined|blog]].
 
 [[inline pages="link(tag/cairo) or link(tag/exa) or link(tag/performance)"]]