Reword a sentence to be less awkward

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@@ -935,9 +935,8 @@ helpful when the commit it isolates is as small as possible.
 
 One advantage of using git over some other systems is that the commit
 speed is blazingly fast. The tool doesn't punish you at all for
-committing as often as you get our project into a state that is worth
-saving. "Commit early, commit often" is a well-supported mode of
-operation with git.
+committing every time your project is in a state worth saving. "Commit
+early, commit often" is a well-supported mode of operation with git.
 
 ### 2.8 Sharing changes